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Goals: Fluency and conversation, vocabulary
I really want to be great at speaking English but this goal might not be achieved in the future.
My goal is to be an advanced English speaker. However, this goal is very challenging and may be difficult to achieve.Revised
I don’t think im not succeeding in English so because i took a Korean English speaking test and i always scored intermediate high or intermediate middle, not advanced low.
I am progressing (verb) in learning English. When I take the Korean English exams, I usually score in the intermediate high or intermediate middle range.Revised
- Try to use the positive to be more clear. instead of not doing something, try to use the opposite of what you are doing. Also remember to use “the” when talking about scores.
My goal is advanced low but every time i take exams i like this. i don’t smoothly say the words so it has been for three years so it is very challenging.
My goal is to score advanced low on the exam but sometimes I speak without fluency. Sometimes I do not speak so smoothly so it is very challenging.Revised
No one in real life just a tutor from online class, just once a week. so that is/that’s all. so i just read American English books to make up for some kind of…
I am not usually around people who speak English. I only get to practice when I meet with a tutor or when I read American books or watch TV. I do these things to make up for the lack of English around me.Revised
- Putting tutoring, books, and tv in a list is more clear. Remember to add “is” to the sentence “so that IS all” for proper grammar and fluency. Use “for” at the end of the phrase “to make up.”
there is no one that i can speak with in English so i think just reading the books and shadowing American sitcoms and writing down some diaries in English.
There is no one that i can speak with in English so i think reading books, watching American sitcoms, and writing in English helps me a lot.Revised
Its like the family, not that rich compared to the modern family.
In the show, the family is not as rich as the modern family.Revised
I guess many people want to compare themselves with others so that they can get an idea of their success.
In my opinion, many people compare themselves to others because they want to understand their own level of success.Revised
Many people just to say to brag about their job positions and they also say they graduated from prestigious universities and they get married to some famous or popular people so they want to show themselves to others.
Many people brag about their jobs, education, and marriage status. Because people want to show off to others, they will brag about their jobs, education, and marriage status.Revised
I will not specify the person just the in my opinion i think
most the most successful person is the person who is satisfied with his or her life overall because they think they are happy.
Without a specific person in mind, generally speaking, i think the most successful person is someone who is overall satisfied with their life because overall they are happy. Because they are happy overall with their life.Revised
- Use the word “the” before the adjective and noun “most successful” for proper grammar. Also swap “his or her” for “their” to be more concise. Remember the word “overall” can also go at the end.